Lover Mine by J. R. Ward

By | 7 May 2010 | 17 Responses

Lover Mine by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 8)

With this latest instalment in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series, J. R. Ward returns to form and delivers a story packed with action and emotion. The crack is back.

This was the make-or-break BDB book for me. After the disappointment—at times downright disaster—of the previous three books, I was prepared to give this series one last chance.

I’m so glad I did.

Gone are the random new H-words and awful brand name dropping on every other page. Indeed, there’s nary a ‘messie me’ to be found in Lover Mine.

Yes, the BDB slang still veers towards dagginess, question marks are still missing in action, and Ward makes some utterly ridiculous word choices—in some cases inventing new words that made my eyes twitch—but on the whole the editing is a lot tighter and the prose much improved from even the earliest Black Dagger Brotherhood books.

In Lover Mine, it feels like Ward is stretching her writing a lot more. Structurally, the story is less episodic that the most recent BDB books, despite juggling at least seven plotlines at the same time.

In my review of Lover Avenged I believed that Ward is steering this series towards urban fantasy. I was wrong. The romance is right smack in the centre of Lover Mine.

Characters we know and love

The story opens with an excerpt from Darius’s journal while at war camp in the 1600s. Although this subplot doesn’t converge with the main story until the very end, Ward maintains an emotional intensity in these interludes that made them difficult to gloss over.

In the present time, John Matthew is obsessed with finding Xhex, who disappeared in the previous book and could well be dead. Xhex is actually being held captive by Lash, head of the lessers, trapped by a spell that prevents her from leaving and other people from seeing or hearing her.

Meanwhile, Blay’s desire for his best friend, Qhuinn, is reaching epic proportions and sets up the kind of deliciously angsty scenes I loved about the earlier BDB books. For me, Ward has always been at her best when describing the sexual tension between three people and Qhuinn/Blay/Other Person are some of the most intense she’s written.

In some ways it’s a rehash of Butch and V, and if you’re a Butch/V shipper you might find this a bit of a rip-off. However, Ward’s treatment of Qhuinn and especially Blay are more emotionally honest than anything she’s done since Butch’s book … BUT—and this is a big but—only if you’re prepared to forget all the character building she did for Qhuinn in the previous books.

Look, we all know that consistency has never been one of Ward’s strong points, and although she tries to provide a framework through which Qhuinn’s previous actions—that is, his largely heterosexual sluttiness—can be explained, it doesn’t stand up to any kind of serious scrutiny. So don’t even bother trying—just enjoy what’s in this book because it’s so very good.

John Matthew and Xhex

For someone who annoyed me no end when he first appeared in the series, John Matthew is not only a worthy hero in this book, but his romance with Xhex is now one of my top three favourites in the BDB.

When JM discovers that Xhex is alive and finds her, it’s the catalyst to breaking down some of the barriers that they had both built against the other. Unlike previous books, this time it’s the heroine who faces a much more confronting emotional journey. There are also some holy crap moments in the story that made me gasp and hold my breath.

For the first time since Lover Revealed, I felt the desire and conflict and angst between the book’s main couple. I skipped all the bonking bits—there’s just a little to much big this, big that, insert this, penetrate that. Still, it’s a lot less complicated than many of the other books—and that’s definitely a positive.

Xhex is by far the strongest heroine we’ve had in the BDB. She’s a warrior in this book, from the first page she appears in, right through to the end. Even though Ward makes the obligatory concessions to the HEA and a certain ideal about love and marriage, I never felt that she lost her grip on Xhex’s character.

JM skates the edge a little, but he never gets as sappy as V or Rehv. THANK YOU, SCRIBE VIRGIN (with two children)!

If you’re interested in JM’s past life, I’m afraid it’s not explained very well—this is one of the more disappointing aspects of the story. The connection between JM and Beth was left unexplored. There’s a chapter in which JM recounts his childhood to Xhex, but, as a reader, knowing that his memories were implanted by the Scribe Virgin made this part of the story feel a little shallow.

I don’t feel I understand what symphaths are any better after this book. The storyline dealing with a mission that Darius and Tohr undertook hundreds of years ago would have been a great way to incorporate this kind of information, but Ward seems so busy following the external plot that she misses the opportunity.

Ward also stretches the happy ending a little too much—I suspect it’s overcompensation for the crappy childhoods that Xhex and JM endured. After all the work Xhex and JM went through to heal and be healed, it didn’t it was feel necessary.

Bromance redux

In a lot of the BDB books, the secondary romance is almost as good—if not better—than the first. I think some readers will definitely feel this with Blay’s story.

Blay is suffering from unrequited love. His best friend Qhuinn is such a slut he bonks the tattoo parlour receptionist, as JM is getting a tattoo done, within hearing distance of his friends. He doesn’t even bother keeping it quiet! I mean, how could you not love such a classy guy?

Blay is to die for. I have no idea whether or not Ward gets gay guys and how they act and speak, but Blay could do nothing to upset me in this book. He’s stuck with Qhinn because they’re committed to keeping JM safe, but the stress of seeing the guy he’s in love with screwing everyone but him is turning him into an emotional wreck.

And the thing I love most about Blay? He recognises his destructive path. He makes a real effort to snap himself out of it. I hope self-awareness is catching in the mansion.

Unfortunately, Ward doesn’t manage Qhuinn quite as well. For one thing, you have to throw out pretty much everything you know about Qhuinn from the previous books. Accept it and move on. Enjoy this series moment by moment. It’s the only way to keep your sanity.

You’d be forgiven for thinking, based on the format of previous books, that Blay’s story would be next in the series. I have since discovered (based on rumour—but I trust my sources) that at best we can hope for a novella because the publisher won’t take the risk.

WTF? People overseas are paying $70+ for a virtually signed copy of these books. FFS, take the bloody risk!

Ahem.

On the upside, maybe Blay’s story will take up half or more of Payne’s book. One can only hope.

Bits and pieces to avoid spoilers

For someone whose book is coming next, Payne remains relatively undeveloped and, to me, largely unappealing. She gets a mini-storyline, but it’s all whingeing and moaning that even the occasional arse-kicking can’t make up for. (And anyway, she’s kicking Wrath’s arse, so it’s not like we want her to win too much, especially when Wrath is no longer as irritating as he was in Lover Avenged.) I’m struggling with the idea that she gets a book when Blay doesn’t,

Of all the recurring characters, Layla is the one I have most sympathy for. I wish she’d find some happiness. She’s always being taken advantage of. Plus, she’s trying to give it away and no one wants it! Which is a bit like Marissa, when I think about it.

One of the big issues I had with character behaviour in this book was the excessive drinking to achieve an emotional coma. Ward seems to use it as shorthand for macho behaviour. Not every guy gets on the piss when things don’t go their way, and I was uncomfortable by how casually it was treated.

Oh, and Xhex learns sign language like it’s not another language. One minute she’s learning letters, and a few scenes later she’s translating JM’s gestures. And, I mean, it’s not like he’s teaching her sign language in his bedroom all day, is he?

And the bits I skipped

There’s a storyline about some sleazy tabloid reporter and his bimbo-ish assistant investigating a ghost. I skimmed these parts when it was clear they were going nowhere. It’s the one big misstep in an otherwise highly enjoyable book.

Yay or nay?

This is J. R. Ward at her best. The angst, the desire, the obstacles—Lover Mine has them all and Ward weaves them together in a most satisfying way. Don’t pay too much attention to inconsistencies or gaps from previous BDB books and you’ll enjoy the book even more. Even though it’ll be a huge challenge to keep me from yawning when Payne’s book comes out, this series is back on my autobuy list.

Lover Mine is published in Australia by Piatkus (Hachette). The book is published in the US in hardback by New American Library.

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Title: Lover Mine (excerpt)
Series: Black Dagger Brotherhood (Book 8)
Author: J. R. Ward
ISBN: 9780749941789
Release date: May 6, 2010
Publisher: Piatkus (Hachette Australia)
Format: A format

Where you can buy this book

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Books in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series (Australia/UK)

Dark Lover by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 1) - Australian/UK editionLover Eternal by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 2) - Australian/UK editionLover Awakened by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 3) - Australian/UK editionLover Revealed by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 4) - Australian/UK editionLover Unbound by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 5) - Australian/UK editionLover Enshrined by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 6) - Australian/UK editionLover Avenged by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 7) - Australian/UK editionLover Mine by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 8)Lover Unleashed by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 9) - Australian/UK editionLover Reborn by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 10) - Australian/UK editionLover At Last by JR Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 11) - Australian editionThe King by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 12) - Australian editionThe Black Dagger Brotherhood - An Insider's Guide

Books in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series (US)

Dark Lover by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 1) - US editionLover Eternal by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 2) - US editionLover Awakened by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 3) - US editionLover Revealed by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 4) - US editionLover Unbound by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 5) - US editionLover Enshrined by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 6) - US editionLover Avenged by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 7) - US editionLover Mine by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 8) - US editionLover Unleashed by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 9) - US editionLover Reborn by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 10)Lover At Last by JR Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 11) - US editionThe King by J. R. Ward (Black Dagger Brotherhood, Book 12) - US editionThe Black Dagger Brotherhood - An Insider's Guide

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Kat

Killer of Fairies
Kat Mayo is a freelance writer, Twitter tragic and compulsive reader. She is the editor of Booktopia's Romance Buzz and hosts the Heart to Heart podcast for Destiny Romance. Her articles have been published in Books+Publisher, the AWW Challenge blog, and the ARRA newsletter. Kat firmly believes in happy endings. She kills fairies with glee.

17 comments »

  1. buttercup

    I am a renewed fangirl. Nothing but love for this book. Go Team Blay!

  2. Claire (sparklybearsy)

    I really liked your review! It differs from my own since what scenes bothered you didn’t bother me so much, i too just didn’t get exactly why the whole ghost house scenario was in there, like there wasn’t a better way to intro Murhder? idk, it just seemed un-necessasary BUT i am glad he’s in the BDB mix now, and really looking forward to seeing more of him.
     
    I heart John Matthew so much and i was so happy to see Ward get back to what she did best and that was spin us an angst filled lovely romance, i never much cared for Xhex in precious books, but i did worry her core character would change from tough assassin to some wishy washy in love female, so it pleased me Ward kept Xhex just as she was, their romance just warmed me all fuzzy =)
     
    Team Qhuay! haha, had to say it!
     
    Oh and first time ive seen the new revamped UK covers, mine are the old style, i LOVE the new ones. so colourful and sexy.
    Enjoyed reading your review =D

  3. SarahT

    I still need to read this book, so I skipped to your ‘Yay or Nay’ section. I was disappointed in the last couple of BDB books but it sounds like I might enjoy this one. Thank you and I’ll be back to read your review in full once I’ve read ‘Lover Mine’!

  4. Magdalen

    You mentioned not understanding symphaths any better now, and a light went off for me.  That’s because in the BDB universe, things are ALWAYS something, until it’s convenient that they not be.  Xhex is a symphath; she uses self-inflicted pain to control her symphath side.  Only she leaves those devices aside for the rest of the book (pretty much) and nothing happens.  As I understand symphaths (which is not very much at all), they’re roughly sociopaths who can “read” the emotional grids of those around them.  Which is kicky and fun in its way, but in order to make them baddies, symphaths use all information learned in this way to the detriment of others.  Only we’ve seen none of this, and I now think it’s just one of those us vs. them fictions that supposed to be scary, but isn’t.
    I realize asking for logic and consistency is crazy with Ward, and anyway the scary stuff is never very scary.  For me, the books work when the couple works.  This couple works, but as their story has been spread over three (or more!) books, Lover Mine isn’t a fave.  Bring Mhurdur Muhrdur Murhdur (oh, you know who I mean) + Payne!

  5. azteclady

    gah
    Now I may have to read this one–I mean, amazon is selling it–hardcover–for less than a new trade paperback! Of course, since I have yet to read the previous one, I’d have to buy that one too… ack!
    (and here I thought I was cured of the addiction)

  6. Marg

    I haven’t read the last few BDB books and so I have skipped a lot of your review, but the bits I skimmed have made me think that maybe, just maybe, I should pick up the book I was up to and work my way through to this book.

  7. Kat (author)

    buttercup — I love Blay. He doesn’t get a proper book—I feel so ripped off!

    Claire — Thanks. :-) I loved the angst! Ward does it so well, doesn’t she? As for the cover, I won’t lie—I like the US version better…but not the price!

    Sarah — I was surprised at how much I enjoyed this book. Couldn’t put it down once I started. I can’t wait to hear what you think.

    Magdalen — I think you’ve hit the nail on the head when it comes to Ward’s worldbuilding. To me, she’s like my Passion Pop read. I never start her books expecting too much depth—I’m just in it for the fizz.

    Also, are we sure that Payne ends up with him? Because that’s not what I heard… ;-)

    azteclady and Marg — If you can stand to skip books, I’d say you can probably just go straight to Lover Mine. (Or read the cheat sheets and get up to speed without having to slog through the books.) Unless you like the lesser subplots, in which case you should probably read Lover Avenged at least.

  8. azteclady

    Thank you, Kat, but I’m one of those obsessive readers who has to read. every. book. in a series (and in order too).
    I confess that I laughed at Magdalen’s comment, because it perfectly sums up what bugs me so much about the books. Remember how Zsadist is described in the first book? A psychopath. Now check out the Zsadist in the short story from the Insider’s Guide.
    Yup, exactly so.

  9. Kat (author)

    azteclady — I had a problem with Z(ed) in his own book. He was so sappy at the end—it was terrible!

  10. Misha

    Loved the review.
    One issue… The man and women reporters if I am correct they are only in the book to bring Muhrdur into the books? At least that was my thoughts when I read it. It was murhdur yes? Well however it was, the man and women serve the purpose of bringing that character back into the series.
     
     

  11. Decadence

    Misha, as far as I’m aware, Gregg and Holly have served their purpose and found love in the serving so we probably won’t see them again. Given all the teasing we’ve had about this character since Lover Unbound, maybe Murhder didn’t need such a circuitous intro, but it’s raised a lot of questions for me about what he’s really like and why he does what he does. I still don’t know where “surfboard” (or was it “Surf. Board.”?) fits in.

  12. Bex

    Team Qhuay!!!! (just had to get that out there first!!)

    I was really disappointed with this book. I am re-reading them all now in the lead up to Lover Unleashed, so perhaps I will enjoy it the second time round; but on my first reading of Lover Mine I really didn’t like it.
    I too skipped the scenes with the Ghost Hunters – turns out it did introduce a new Brother (or should I say an old one -  Murdher *spell check*) but it was pretty much pointless other than that.

    I mostly skipped through the book to the scenes involving Blay and Qhuinn. I LOVE Blaylock with all my heart. I even found myself getting angry at Layla for being stupid enough to think she was going to end up with Qhuinn. Then I finally realised that she is just as innocent and full of heart as Blay.

    I really do like Xhex and John as a couple. I think they are good for each other. But some of the language and writing in the book just made me cringe.

    I am mostly looking forward to Lover Unleased just so I can find out what’s going on with Blaylock (and how Saxton is ‘treating’ him)

  13. MPV

    I liked your review and I agree with a lot of what yo said, in fact I realised after reading this one, that I skipped many things in the other three books that I didn´t cared back then and reread some parts of those forbetter consistency in the story of this one. My only complain is that she waisted too much time of the subplots and they sometimes put in the wrong places, there were many times aduring the highest angst moments, when John was still trying to find Xhex or when she goes to the places she is being held captive or during the tie she is taken to the brotherhood mansion, and all that parts of them reconecting, those were highly emotional moments and she kept cuting in with the other subplots, cuting with that the emotional atmosphire she had managed to creat with either JM/Xhex or with Blay/Qhuinn.

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